Little Miss Laura May
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big fan of amnesty international protect the human

anyway, yeh that sounds good to me. my personal statement wasn't very long. at first i was massively over words and what not but i became very brutal very quickly, we are not applying for english short to the point

im not too sure how you have formatted the rest of it so im not too sure how much hobbies you have to include. but i definately put no more than that. my format was:
opening sentence
work experience and what ive learnt from it
a levels
achievements and commitments eg adjutant of ccf d of e young enterprise blah blah blah
then a short paragraph of in my spare time i enjoy

i hope this has been remotely helpful

as for work experience try not to worry i decided i wanted to do medicine precisely 1 week before the deadline and i still got 2 offers

hey i got 2 offers from my personal statement last year, edinburgh also said they liked my ps but felt i needed a slightly stronger UKCAT, so if i can help at all let me know!!