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Heya, just read on one of your posts that you check personal statements....I'm predicted 3 A's and an A in the AS but only got 590 in my UKCAT, so am a bit anxious as to getting in. I know therefore, my personal statement needs to be really strong; if you could give me any advice i'd be really grateful


Whilst the human body is a remarkable machine it may easily malfunction. Today people live longer, healthier lives of a better quality. The idea of a career which incorporates both science and care in a social setting has inspired me to strive to overcome every milestone I may encounter. Like any individual striving to reach a goal, it is vital to immerse myself in the task whilst playing a key role within a team. Like any goal, however, it is not worth achieving unless I can implement the task properly with the utmost professionalism and ethical practice. As I grow older I wish not only to benefit from the continuing advances of medical care, but rather to be someone who helped achieve it.
My A-Level choices have reinforced my desire to study medicine by allowing me to develop the essential skills necessary for the medical degree. In Religious Studies, I have become more aware of the complexities of ethical issues, such as stem cell research and organ transplantation. A-Level Biology has given me sufficient background to appreciate the systematic nature of the human body whilst learning the foundations needed for a medical degree; perhaps the most challenging of my three subjects, it has taught me the need to be dedicated and committed. My natural tendency to question and investigate has been enhanced by my studies in Chemistry and has augmented my understanding of Biology. In addition, I have enjoyed Business Studies at A-Level this has allowed me to develop analytical and evaluative skills.
During my early childhood I became curious of the human body and the implications of its malfunctioning when visiting my cousin who had contracted Multiple Sclerosis. I struggled to come to terms with the degenerative nature of the disease yet was compelled to question its cause and prognosis. Whilst carrying out my research I noticed a number of articles which discussed a geographic variation in Multiple Sclerosis prevalence; claiming that the disease had an increased occurrence at higher latitudes. As a result of this peculiar link I became fascinated with the nature and course of a number of degenerative diseases such as Parkinson's disease and Muscular Dystrophy.
My desire to read medicine was confirmed whilst shadowing a consultant Physician at Guy's and St. Thomas' Hospital. There I had the chance to experience life as a medic. On the ward round, I encountered a number of patients with various complaints; some very serious. On a ward I met a man with advanced lung cancer. Watching the consultant speak to the patient with such empathy, I realised the level of sensitivity needed when dealing with patients, particularly those who are terminally ill. From this I began to understand that medicine is not just about healing the body but also taking care of psychological and emotional wellbeing of the patient.
Outside of school I am heavily involved with Irish dancing and will be taking part in the British, Irish and World Qualifier Championships in the coming months. I often take on a teaching role, passing on the skills I have learnt to younger members. Dancing has taught me many important lessons. They are that dedication and hard work, together with effective communication produces excellent results and that self analysis is vital to improving performance.
Apart from my regular prefect duties which I enjoy immensely, I am head of the St. Vincent De Paul society, an international Christian charity which provides practical assistance to those in need. I along with my team of helpers offer support in the local community such as visiting elderly residents in nursing homes.
I am eager to face the challenges university life will offer me. I look forward to being part of the ever changing field of medicine whilst working amongst people from varied social backgrounds. As a confident and self motivated individual, I am in no doubt that I have the qualities to become a successful doctor.